Сочинение на тему Мое Хобби. Мои увлечения, футбол и музыка

I very versatile person. For example, I am an ardent football fan andsimultaneously love music. I like the smell of freshly cut grass on thefootball field. My hobby is love to the notes. When I hear music I amdissolved in it. But when I see a soccer ball I have a desire to run upto him and kick it out there. Gentle sounds of beautiful music andthirst for sport live in me. Thus, my Hobbies are football and music. Так пойдет?