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Проверьте сочинение, пожалуйста, и исправьте ошибки, где это требуется.Foreign languages is very important in my life. I need to learn foreign languages to improve my thinking. Also, I must learn languages to be able to speak with foreigners. And speaking with foreigners can give you a good experience. Languages will help you to get a job without any problems, they can help you to improve your diction. Knowing of languages will help you to pass the exams to the universities. As for me, I learn English at my school. I started learning English when I was 6 and I was in the first form. I have been learning English for 8 years. English is very necessary for me, because I know that English will help me in my future profession. Also I want to visit English-speaking countries to learn more about their culture, traditions, and to make English-speaking friends. Странно, почему-то это добавилось в раздел 10-11 класс…