Проверьте, плиз, текст на наличие грамматических и лингвистических…

Проверьте, плиз, текст на наличие грамматических и лингвистических ошибок… Может, стоит что-либо перефразировать, написать более простым языком? My ideal school.I very much like my school, but I want to change something. My ideal school would also have lockers for books and personal things like in American schools. Also each student will be able to choose subjects which he wants to study. Russian will be obligatory for all because it is necessary to be competent. Lessons will be for thirty minutes, and changes for ten minutes. At my ideal school there will be many actions, as now.