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Народ помогите пожалуйста, проверьте правельно ли я написал сочинение это гугл перевод сами знаете как переводит. Спасибо In our time, thecomputer has become an integral part of our lives. Information that allows us to use the computer anywhere, including in electronic learning. The question arises as helpful or harmful e-learning. Positive aspects of e-learning is that you can find any information from your computer or to create a virtual model . Another plus is that you can communicate with your friend and ask him for help.